Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇有關(guān)自然災(zāi)害的文章(80詞左右)。

1. 4月21日，一場龍卷風(fēng)(tornado)襲擊了湖南衡陽(Hengyang);

2.一開始，天變黑，大家能聽到一陣奇怪的噪音，很害怕，無人知道正發(fā)生什么;

3.幾分鐘后，人們聽到雷聲，看到閃電，然后一切開始移動，最后，它突然停止;

4.在這次災(zāi)難中，7人死亡，2400多房屋倒塌，數(shù)千人無處居住，學(xué)生無處上課;

5.災(zāi)難后，人們開始互救，許多警察來幫忙;

6.如果大家都樂于幫助需要幫助的人，世界將充滿愛。

Answer 1

【答案】On April 21st, a tornado hit Hengyang in Hunan.

At the beginning, the sky became dark. Everyone could hear a strange noise. They were very afraid. But nobody knew what was happening. A few minutes later, people heard the thunder and saw the lightning. Then everything began to move. Finally, it suddenly stopped.

During the disaster, seven people lost their lives. Over 2,400 houses fell down. Thousands of people had nowhere to live. The students had no classrooms to have lessons. After the disaster, people began to help each other. Many policemen came to help. I think everyone should be willing to help people in need, and the world will be full of love.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示描寫發(fā)生在湖南衡陽的一場龍卷風(fēng)，題目中給出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，詳細(xì)敘述了這次災(zāi)害發(fā)生的過程以及災(zāi)后的影響，我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。通過審題可知，這篇短文記敘的是過去發(fā)生的一件事，故全文應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主來敘述，注意應(yīng)將動詞變?yōu)檫^去式，尤其應(yīng)注意不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。文章最后的感受可以用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作中應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能依據(jù)提示逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語、句型，句式以簡單句為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升文章檔次，可穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。