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2．南丁格爾是一個(gè)心地善良、樂(lè)于助人的人，她終生奉獻(xiàn)于護(hù)士事業(yè)，為紀(jì)念她，人們把她的生日5月12日定為世界護(hù)士日（International Nurses Day），請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下面的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文簡(jiǎn)要介紹她的生平．
要求：1．文章字?jǐn)?shù)在80-100詞之間，可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校等信息．

1820	be born，in a rich family
1851	be trained
During the war	save soldiers'lives，the front hospitals
After the war	become a national hero，open the world's first nurse school
1910	die
1974	become，International Nurses Day

A famous British nurse-Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse．She was born in a rich family on May 12，1820．She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others，especially the sick．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．During the war，she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers'lives．When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．Later，F(xiàn)lorence Nightingale opened the world's first nurse school．Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910．In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是簡(jiǎn)要介紹南丁格爾的生平．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.1820年出生于一個(gè)富裕的家庭
2.1851年接受培訓(xùn)
3．戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)期間：拯救戰(zhàn)士的生命，在前線醫(yī)院
4．戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后：成為國(guó)際英雄，開(kāi)辦了世界上第一所護(hù)士學(xué)校
5.1910年去世
6.1974．她的生日定為世界護(hù)士日
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be born 出生
come back 返回
be ready to do sth 樂(lè)于做某事
because of 因?yàn)?br />【高分句型】
1．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．
一般過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，was/were+過(guò)去分詞．
2．When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day ①because of the great love and help ②she gave to people．
①because of 因?yàn)椋�由于，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
②省略了關(guān)系詞which的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞love and help，which作為賓語(yǔ)故省略．

解答 A famous British nurse-Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse．She was born in a rich family on May 12，1820．（出生日和家庭）She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others，especially the sick．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．【高分句型】（訓(xùn)練）During the war，she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers'lives．（戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)期間拯救戰(zhàn)士生命）When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．【高分句型】Later，F(xiàn)lorence Nightingale opened the world's first nurse school．（戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后成為英雄開(kāi)辦學(xué)校）Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910．（去世）In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people．【高分句型】（世界護(hù)士日）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類(lèi)作文寫(xiě)作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少