Question

2．假如你是某中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生．6月3日，是星期五，在放學(xué)回家的公交車上，你所經(jīng)歷的一件事讓你印象深刻．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇日記．
要點(diǎn)：
1．一位老爺爺和十來歲的孫子上了車，老人拿著書包和小提琴；
2．你給老人讓座，老人的孫子卻坐了下來，老人只得站在旁邊；
3．孩子大聲喊著向老人要水喝，并將空水瓶扔到車上．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
On my way home on the bus，I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten我回家的路上，在公交車上，看見一個(gè)老人和他十來歲的孫子一起上車了．
on one's way to+地點(diǎn)：去某地的路上，home是副詞，省略了to．
【高分句型二】
I think①the boy should ②not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean我認(rèn)為男孩不僅僅應(yīng)該尊重和照顧老人也要保護(hù)環(huán)境．
①think后是省略that的賓語從句．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…

解答 June3，F(xiàn)riday                                                             Fine
On my way home on the bus，I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten．【高分句型一】He was carrying the boy's schoolbag and violin．（一位老爺爺和十來歲的孫子上了車，老人拿著書包和小提琴）I gave my seat to the old man at once．However，the boy sat down first．The old man had to stand nearby．（你給老人讓座，老人的孫子卻坐了下來，老人只得站在旁邊；）After a while，the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus．（孩子大聲喊著向老人要水喝，并將空水瓶扔到車上）
When I saw this，I got very angry．I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean．【高分句型二】（我的看法）

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