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【題目】 5月22日是世界野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)日�，F(xiàn)今人類(lèi)活動(dòng)破壞了野生動(dòng)物的生活環(huán)境，使他們失去了家園，瀕臨滅絕。保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物是每個(gè)人的責(zé)任。請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖，以Protecting Wild Animals為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，呼吁人類(lèi)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。

要求：

1.內(nèi)容要全面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意要通順連貫；

2.詞數(shù)不少于100，開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞 fur n. 皮毛；a wild animal protection group野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)組織

Protecting Wild Animals

Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.

But today_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please join us. Let’s try our best to protect wild animals.

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Protecting Wild Animals

Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.

But today more and more animals are in great danger. Many of them are endangered. Humans cut down trees and the environment is polluted seriously, so the animals are losing their homes. People also kill them for money and fur, and some even eat the meat.

How can we protect the endangered wild animals? The government should set up a wild animal protection group. We should also learn more about wild animals. Our government should develop laws to stop the sale of wild animals.

Please join us. Let’s try our best to protect wild animals.

【解析】

1.本文是一篇話題作文。本文以“保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物”為題，描述動(dòng)物所面臨的情況，保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的原因及方法。

2.本文采用的是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。邏輯性強(qiáng)，句子通順。

3.高分亮點(diǎn)：

短語(yǔ)：in danger處于危險(xiǎn)中；cut down砍倒；set up設(shè)立；try one’s best to do sth盡某人最大努力去做某事。

句子：Humans cut down trees and the environment is polluted seriously句中運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；Let’s try our best to protect wild animals此句是一個(gè)祈使句。