Question

目前，學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重，請(qǐng)圍繞以下要點(diǎn)談?wù)勂渲性�因以及個(gè)人建議。
原因：1.考試太濫   2.自身勤奮不夠   3.把大量時(shí)間用在上網(wǎng)和玩游戲上  4.為了騙取家長(zhǎng)和老師高興
看法與建議：1、作弊有害；2、要做人誠(chéng)實(shí)，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；3、學(xué)校應(yīng)減少考試。
要求：1、字?jǐn)?shù)80—100；2、圍繞要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit——cheating in examinations.
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Answer 1

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit — cheating in examinations.
There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of them are too difficult.
Second, some students are not hard-working and they don’t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven’t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and
only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.

試題分析：首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如. a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit；Second, some students are not hard-working and they don’t work hard at their lessons還運(yùn)用了短語(yǔ)does great harm to ；have enough time to prepare for 以及用了倒裝句only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：First，Second，Third，F(xiàn)inally，In my opinion, Besides等等。層次分明，表達(dá)流暢。