Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

我們學(xué)校和江陰廣電公眾號“最江陰”將在11月份開展“菁園最美少年”的評選活動。班主任老師要求大家積極推選，你打算推薦你們班的David參加本次活動的評選，請用英文寫信向你的班主任吳老師介紹一下David的情況。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 積極活潑，樂意接受挑戰(zhàn)；

2. 愛好畫畫，作品曾獲高度贊譽(yù)；

3. 擅長運(yùn)動，剛參加校足球隊(duì)選拔；

4. 充滿愛心，常做很多自愿者工作；

5. 對他影響最深的人是他父親，因?yàn)?/span>……。

注意事項(xiàng)：

1. 介紹須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。

2. 第五要點(diǎn)用2-3句話補(bǔ)充完整，內(nèi)容正確，符合題意。

3. 詞數(shù)90左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Wu,

I would like to recommend David as “Nicest Student” in our school.

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We hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Wu,

I would like to recommend David as “Nicest Student” in our school.

He is active and lively, and he is willing to accept the challenge. He loves to draw. His works have been highly praised. He is good at sports.He has just joined the school football team. He is full of love.He often does a lot of volunteer work. The man who has the most influence on him is his father, because his father is always ready to help others.

We hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Tao

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如The man who has the most influence on him is his father, because his father is always ready to help others.

等等。