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14．假如外商布朗先生將來紅光帽廠洽談業(yè)務(wù)，請(qǐng)你以該廠銷售員的身份，在答題卡指定的位置上用英語寫一篇短文，向他介紹工廠概況，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．紅光帽廠建于1998年；
2．現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學(xué)畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學(xué)生；技師來自上海的大工廠；
3．工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量?jī)?yōu)良；
4．銷售情況和合作愿望．
注意：
1．短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求條理清楚、語句通順；
2．第4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾均已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：質(zhì)量  quality
Mr Brown，
Welcome to the Red Light Hat Factory!Our factory was set up in 1998．It has about 200 workers．Most of them were high school students．After they finished school，they returned to their home town．The engineers come from the big factories in Shanghai． Our factory mainly makes hats for children and women．The hats are of good quality．They sell well in the markets of Europe．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．Orders for our hats are welcomed!
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以銷售員的身份介紹紅光帽廠．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．紅光帽廠建于1998年；
2．現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學(xué)畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學(xué)生；技師來自上海的大工廠；
3．工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量?jī)?yōu)良；
4．銷售情況和合作愿望．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
set up 建立
come from 來自
make…for 為…制作…
be of good quality質(zhì)量好
【高分句型】
1．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．
more hats than 比較級(jí)的使用．
2．Orders for our hats are welcomed!
are welcomed一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)被動(dòng)語態(tài)的使用

解答 One possible version：
Mr Brown，
Welcome to the Red Light Hat Factory!
Our factory was set up in 1998．（紅光帽廠建于1998年）It has about 200 workers．Most of them were high school students．After they finished school，they returned to their home town．The engineers come from the big factories in Shanghai．（工人和技師）Our factory mainly makes hats for children and women．The hats are of good quality．（工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量?jī)?yōu)良）They sell well in the markets of Europe．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．【高分句型】Orders for our hats are welcomed!【高分句型】（銷售情況和合作愿望）
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．材料中給的資料比較全面，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問題．結(jié)合材料可知本文主要用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．