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14．我們的身體是最寶貴的財(cái)富之一，健康高于一切．沒有一個(gè)強(qiáng)健的身體，一切無從談起．近年來，中小學(xué)生健康問題日益引起人們的關(guān)注．學(xué)生們面臨著嚴(yán)重的健康問題．請你圍繞學(xué)生面臨的健康問題，談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担?br />要求：1詞數(shù)：80-100詞  2不要逐句翻譯．
3字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰．
To Keep Healthy
Everyone wants to keep healthy today，especially we students．But we don't pay attention to our health．
Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning．Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day，especially at theweekends．Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke．They're all doing harm to us．
It is important for us to have good habits．We should eat breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play games for a short time，then have a rest．We can alsojoin in some clubs．The most important is that we should do more sports．
I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是圍繞學(xué)生面臨的健康問題，談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1學(xué)生們面臨的健康問題
2怎樣才能保持健康
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
do harm to 對…有害
have a rest休息
join in 參加
keep healthy保持健康
【高分句型】
1．Many boys think①②it is cool to drink or smoke．
①think后跟省略了that的賓語從句．
②it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．
2．The most important is that we should do more sports．
that引導(dǎo)的是表語從句，和is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．

解答 To Keep Healthy
  Everyone wants to keep healthy today，especially we students．But we don't pay attention to our health．
  Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning．Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day，especially at theweekends．Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke．【高分句型】They're all doing harm to us．（學(xué)生們面臨的健康問題）
It is important for us to have good habits．We should eat breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play games for a short time，then have a rest．We can also join in some clubs．The most important is that we should do more sports．【高分句型】（怎樣才能保持健康）
I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型．主要考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用已學(xué)的語言基礎(chǔ)知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)客觀事實(shí)，闡述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行思想交流的書面表達(dá)能力．為了提高書面表達(dá)水平，平時(shí)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實(shí)，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫作的好方法．