Question

假如你是王婷，就個人愛好帶來的困惑給你的筆友David發(fā)電子郵件進行交流并請求幫助。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出的內容不記入總詞數(shù)）
2. 內容必須包括表中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯。
3. 條理清楚，詞句連貫
4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名，校名和人名。

Dear David,
I’m writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I don’t know what to do with it and need your help.
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Yours,
Wangting

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I don’t know what to do with it and need your help.
I like watching TV, especially I am interested in game shows. I hope I can answer all the questions correctly and win the prize. But my parents don’t allow me to watch TV. They think watching Tv is a waste of time. They are also afraid I can’t put all my heart into the study. Instead, I think game shows are including a lot of knowledge.  For example, they can exercise a person’s thinking ability and reaction ability.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Wangting

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】文中多次使用主從復合句，增加了不少文采。如：I hope I can answer all the questions correctly and win the prize. They are also afraid I can’t put all my heart into the study. Instead, I think game shows are including a lot of knowledge.