Question

14．請你根據(jù)下表中提供的材料，為中學(xué)生朋友寫一篇題為"Always Be Careful"的短文，并談?wù)勀銓χ袑W(xué)生自我安全保護(hù)的看法．

在家	不要讓陌生人進(jìn)屋或單獨出去見網(wǎng)友…
在學(xué)校	不要在教室里互相追逐；運動時，注意保護(hù)自己…
在路上	放學(xué)按時回家，遵守交通規(guī)則，不要橫穿馬路…
我的看法：

要求：（1）文中不得使用自己的真實姓名和地名．
（2）詞數(shù)不低于80詞，開頭已給出，不計入字?jǐn)?shù)
Always Be Careful
As a middle school student，we should try to stay away from danger．After watching TV，you are supposed to turn it off in time．If you're home alone，don't open the door for strangers easily or invite friends that you have made online to your home．
While you are at school，running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous．At the same time，you should remember to protect yourselfwhen doing sports．Once you are in the street traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．For example，never listen to music until while riding a bike，Besides，always follow the traffic lights．
In short，I think everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Always Be Careful"為題談?wù)勀銓χ袑W(xué)生自我安全保護(hù)的看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．在家；不要讓陌生人進(jìn)屋或單獨出去見網(wǎng)友
2．在學(xué)校；不要在教室里互相追逐；運動時，注意保護(hù)自己
3．在路上；放學(xué)按時回家，遵守交通規(guī)則，不要橫穿馬路
4．我的看法
常用到的重點短語：
br supposed to 應(yīng)該做某事
turn off 關(guān)掉
run after 追逐
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
all the time 一直

【高分句型】
1．①If you're home alone，don't open the door for strangers easily or invite friends ②that you have made online to your home．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．
②that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，that作為從句的賓語，修飾先行詞friends．
2．①At the same time，you should②remember to protect yourself③when doing sports．
①at the same time 同時，作為插入語．
②remember to do sth 記得去做某事
③when doing sports．省略句，完整表達(dá)是when you do spotrs．
3．①Once you are in the street，traffic rules②should be obeyed all the time．
①once 一旦…就，引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句．
②情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)：情態(tài)動詞+be+過去分詞．

解答 Always Be Careful
As a middle school student，we should try to stay away from danger．After watching TV，you are supposed to turn it off in time．If you're home alone，don't open the door for strangers easily or invite friends that you have made online to your home．【高分句型】（在家；不要讓陌生人進(jìn)屋或單獨出去見網(wǎng)友）
While you are at school，running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous．At the same time，you should remember to protect yourself when doing sports．【高分句型】（在學(xué)校；不要在教室里互相追逐；運動時，注意保護(hù)自己）Once you are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．【高分句型】For example，never listen to music  while riding a bike，Besides，always follow the traffic lights．（在路上；放學(xué)按時回家，遵守交通規(guī)則，不要橫穿馬路）
In short，I think everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．（我的看法）

點評 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．運用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時也要符合事實．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．
這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．