Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你叫Mei Mei，在英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站上看見一個帖子，一個叫Susan的美國學(xué)生，平時學(xué)習(xí)非�？炭嗲趭^，但是上次考試卻沒有得到高分，心情很糟糕。請根據(jù)下面的提示，給她寫一封回帖。

1.心情不好是可以理解的。

2.想得到高分沒錯，但學(xué)習(xí)的目的主要是學(xué)到更多的知識，而不僅僅是好成績。

3.提出建議：（1）要與老師、朋友和家人一起分憂，找到適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法。

（2）不要過于擔(dān)心，要放松心態(tài)。如：可在周末走進大自然，欣賞美景�；蛘摺�….

（3）對自己要有自信。

要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右（回帖的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

Dear Susan,

As we all know, many students like you care a lot about their grades in exams.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Susan,

As we all know, many students like you care a lot about their grades in exams. They all want to get high marks, But you should know the goal of studying is to improve our knowledge.

The aim of exams is letting us know how much we know, why we lost the points, then, we should improve ourselves . We can share our worries with our parents and teachers. We can ask other students the problems that we don’t understand. Be hard-working and try our best to get higher marks in the next exam.

My advice is that you should be relaxed before exams. Don’t be worried too much. Try your best. You can also enjoy the beauty outside at the weekends. Believe in yourself!

Wish you good luck!

Loves from

HamMei

【解析】

試題分析：本題目要求寫的是回復(fù)信件，所以要注意信件的格式，結(jié)尾的署名和問候致意。要包括的內(nèi)容要有安慰和考試目的，要有建議。還要注意內(nèi)容的連貫性。要用一般現(xiàn)在時第一人稱。

寫作亮點：這篇短文重點突出，詳略得當；內(nèi)容齊全，語言形式豐富多姿，運用了as we all know ,doing zuo 表語，復(fù)合句，祈使句等多種句子結(jié)構(gòu)，給閱讀者一種全新的感覺。