假如你叫王玲玲,下表是你的家庭情況,請寫一篇家庭的自我介紹,要求有所拓展,字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50。

 

Wang Ling ling

  Mr Wang

  Mrs Wang

 Wang Fang

 Age

    13

     38

      36

     7

Job

  student

  manager

   nurse

 

Place

 at  school

     hotel

   hospital

 

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【答案】

 

One possible version:

My name is Wang Lingling. I’m 13. And I am a student at school. My father is Mr Wang. He is 38. And he is a manager at a hotel. Mrs Wang is my mother and she is 36. She is a nurse at a hospital. My sister is Wang Fang and she is 7. I love my family members. We are very happy.

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,介紹個人情況及家庭成員。本題給出的材料較為詳細。動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點,然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題,然后組織成文。注意敘述的條理性,適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式,在敘述中使用連接詞,使敘述邏輯更為合理,層次更加分明,為文章增色不少.如: at school 在學(xué)校,等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點:考查提綱作文。

 

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