假如你叫王玲玲,下表是你的家庭情況,請寫一篇家庭的自我介紹,要求有所拓展,字數(shù)不少于50。
|
Wang Ling ling |
Mr Wang |
Mrs Wang |
Wang Fang |
Age |
13 |
38 |
36 |
7 |
Job |
student |
manager |
nurse |
|
Place |
at school |
hotel |
hospital |
|
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One possible version:
My name is Wang Lingling. I’m 13. And I am a student at school. My father is Mr Wang. He is 38. And he is a manager at a hotel. Mrs Wang is my mother and she is 36. She is a nurse at a hospital. My sister is Wang Fang and she is 7. I love my family members. We are very happy.
【解析】
試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,介紹個人情況及家庭成員。本題給出的材料較為詳細。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點,然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題,然后組織成文。注意敘述的條理性,適當使用連接詞。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式,在敘述中使用連接詞,使敘述邏輯更為合理,層次更加分明,為文章增色不少.如: at school 在學校,等,學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.
考點:考查提綱作文。
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