Question

根據(jù)下面的提示以“Amazing animals”為題寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)在80左右。

1.世界上最大的動物不是大象，是藍鯨（blue whale）；

2.世界上最大的動物在海洋里，但不是魚；

3.他們很久以前就生活在地球上；

3.它們通常有30米長，重1 000千克。

4.它們是世界上最聰明的動物之一，它們可以相互交談。當(dāng)然，我們是聽不懂的。

Amazing animals

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Answer 1

Amazing animals

Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world’s biggest animals are in the sea—but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago. They’re usually 30 metres long and 1,000 kilos heavy. They’re one of the cleverest animals in the world. They can talk to each other, but people don’t know what they are saying. What are they? They’re called blue whales.

【解析】

試題分析：這里敘述的世界上最大的動物，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱問題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。

【亮點說明】短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：The world’s biggest animals are in the sea—but not fish. They can talk to each other, but people don’t know what they are saying.等，短文還用了一些連詞如：but，what等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)。

考點：提綱作文。