Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(滿分20分)

在生活中，人們常用有一些快樂需要分享，煩惱需要傾訴，這時就需要一個好的傾聽者。請以Be a good listener 為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點：

1.一次傾聽的經(jīng)歷(時間、人物、經(jīng)過）

2.你對傾聽的認(rèn)識(至少兩點)

注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名；

2.詞數(shù)在80--100之間，已給出的文字不計入總詞數(shù)。

Be a good listener

I strongly believe it is important to be a good listener.

Answer 1

【答案】

I strongly believe it is important to be a good listener.

I used to feel stressed before the exam. However, I kept it to myself, as a result, I felt worried and couldn’t pay attention to what the teacher said in class. One day, after I bravely told it to my close friend, I felt that relaxed.

Being a good listener plays an important role in communication. Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust(信任) each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.

In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一個話題作文，要求寫出一次傾聽的經(jīng)歷以及你對傾聽的認(rèn)識。記敘一次傾聽的經(jīng)歷，要把事件的時間，地點，人物，事件的經(jīng)過寫清楚，用第一人稱，用一般過去時進(jìn)行寫作。描寫自己對傾聽的認(rèn)識，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，要體現(xiàn)出積極向上的思想。

寫作亮點：短文開頭直接表達(dá)了作者的觀點：當(dāng)一名好的聽眾很重要；第二段寫自己與人分享自己煩惱前后自己的不同感受；第三段講明了當(dāng)一位好的聽眾的好處；最后一段小結(jié)：總而言之，很好地傾聽可以讓我們彼此走得更近。短文敘述清楚，層次分明。特雖是第三段中，用了一系列的排比句，讀起來感到瑯瑯上口，有一股強(qiáng)大的氣勢，增強(qiáng)了文章的表達(dá)效果。