Question

書面表達(dá)。

下面有幾條從“美國中學(xué)生守則”中摘錄的校規(guī)。請(qǐng)你參照這些內(nèi)容，給你們學(xué)校制定一條校規(guī)，并用事實(shí)說明制定該校規(guī)的理由。

American school rules

1．Don't cheat while taking a test．

2．You may talk to your teacher in your seat．

3．Please raise your hand when answering questions．

要求：1)不使用真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。不使用上面出現(xiàn)的校規(guī)。

2)內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊。詞數(shù)80左右。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

I want to make a school rule．It is

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Answer 1

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　I want to make a school rule．It's “Don't take mobile phones to school．”

　　Many of my classmates take mobile phones to school．They use them to play games．Sometimes they send messages to each other in class．Sometimes they read novels at night and often feel tired and sleepy in class the next day．Sometimes they even use phones to cheat in exams．

　　So I think it's bad for students to take mobile phones to school．It affects not only themselves but also other students．What's more, the students with phones may not be concentrated on their studies．Phones cost their parents money．(90words)Possible version(2)

　　I want to make a school rule．It is “Don't take mobile phones to school．”

　　Phones are more and more widely used, but in my opinion it's not necessary for students to take mobile phones to school．I still remember one day in a math class, our math teacher was explaining a math problem when one of the boy students' phone rang．All the other students turned to him．The teacher had to stop．

　　It not only affected the teacher but also affected ourselves in class．On the other hand, it costs parents money to buy the phones and they have to pay for their children to use the phone．(94 words)

　　檔次　分值　標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

　　一檔　13－15內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯，只有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤。

　　二檔9－12內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯，但有少數(shù)語言錯(cuò)誤。

　　三檔5－8內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)較為清楚，基本符合邏輯，但有一些語言錯(cuò)誤。

　　四檔0－4內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，能寫出少量正確句子，但整體表達(dá)不太連貫，且語言錯(cuò)誤較多。

　　1、評(píng)分原則與方法：

　　(1)采用總體印象評(píng)分法。評(píng)分時(shí)，先確定所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求微調(diào)，最后給分。

　　(2)注意內(nèi)容的完整及語言表達(dá)的正確。本題在寫作具體內(nèi)容上給了考生較大的發(fā)揮空間。單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤，每兩處扣0.5分。

　　(3)書寫工整1分。少于或多于規(guī)定詞數(shù)30％的酌情扣1至3分。

　　2、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

　　(1)校規(guī)明確，事實(shí)清楚，理由充分，給高分(12分以上)。

　　(2)基本完成提出校規(guī)，給出事實(shí)，陳述理由，給及格左右分?jǐn)?shù)(9分上下浮動(dòng))

　　(3)重點(diǎn)看事實(shí)和理由的表述部分。通過這一部分調(diào)節(jié)總體得分。

　　3、評(píng)分檔次：(如下)

　　Possible version(1)

　　(范文只作參考，不作唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，評(píng)卷教師根據(jù)學(xué)生答卷實(shí)際及評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)自行評(píng)判。)