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6．為配合你校創(chuàng)建"綠色健康學(xué)校"工作的全面展開(kāi)，校學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)起以"Make Our School Greener"為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英文短文．文章題目和開(kāi)頭已給出．
（1）愛(ài)護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹(shù)木
（2）保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物
（3）節(jié)約用水，離開(kāi)教室前記得關(guān)燈
（4）堅(jiān)持鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)
（5）禮貌待人，同學(xué)間相處融洽
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)80左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（2）覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
（3）參考詞匯：愛(ài)護(hù)protect； 亂扔廢棄物drop litter； 堅(jiān)持keep on doing
Make Our School Greener
In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in，it is suggested that we students should do many things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away
the waste should be forbidden．Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the
classroom is empty．
What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well
with each other．
In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合你校創(chuàng)建"綠色健康學(xué)校"工作的全面展開(kāi)，校學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)起以"Make Our School Greener"為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英文短文，人稱以第一人稱來(lái)寫，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作要點(diǎn)包括：（1）愛(ài)護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹(shù)木（2）保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物（3）節(jié)約用水，離開(kāi)教室前記得關(guān)燈（4）堅(jiān)持鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)（5）禮貌待人，同學(xué)間相處融洽，由于是向同學(xué)們提出倡議，所以祈使句的使用是必不可少的，在寫作時(shí)要注意其正確使用．

解答 第四節(jié)：書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分15分）
In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in，it is suggested that we students should do many
things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．
What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．
In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，寫作時(shí)要注意文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)還要注意句式的正確運(yùn)用，例如祈使句和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞就是本篇作文的關(guān)鍵．寫作時(shí)，要注意句式的變化使用．