分析 這是一篇圖畫作文.內容是根據(jù)圖畫說說小男孩愛護動物的故事.時態(tài)主要為一般過去時.人稱主要為第三人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點:
1.描述圖畫;放學途中看見有人賣青蛙,上前阻止,但阻止不了,回家拿自己的零花錢買了所有的青蛙,將青蛙放回河里
2.感受;
常用到的重點短語:
on one's way to+地點 某人去某地的路上
want to do sth 想要做某事
agree with 贊同
at once 立刻
as…as sb could 盡可能的…
【高分句型】
1.①On his way home he found a man②who wanted to sell a net of frogs.
①on one's way to+地點 某人去某地的路上,home是副詞,故省略to.
②who作為關系詞的定語從句,who作為從句的主語,修飾先行詞man.
2.He came up①to stop him ②as quickly as he could.
①動詞不定式做目的狀語
②as…as sb could 盡可能的…
3.He ran back to the man①at once and all the frogs ②were bought by him.
①at once 立刻
②一般過去時的被動語態(tài)was/were+過去分詞.
解答 Tom is a loving boy.He loves animals very much.
One day,Tom went home after school.On his way home he found a man who wanted to sell a net of frogs.【高分句型】He came up to stop him as quickly as he could.【高分句型】But the man didn't agree with him.He rushed home and took out all his money from his money pot.He ran back to the man at once and all the frogs were bought by him.【高分句型】At last he took the frogs to the river and let the frogs go back to the river.(描述圖畫)
What a good boy!We should learn from him.(感受)
點評 這是一篇根據(jù)所給圖示寫一篇敘事完整,語句規(guī)范的作文.這就要求仔細觀察每幅圖畫的內容,然后考慮用什么樣的句子來描述圖畫.細節(jié)方面就要注意時態(tài),語法以及銜接詞的運用等.
這篇文章語言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確,能夠把圖畫中的內容敘述清楚,做到了首尾呼應,是一篇不錯的文章.
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