Question

【題目】【四川省樂山市2015年中考英語(yǔ)試題】書面表達(dá)（滿分 20分）

近幾年，越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人出國(guó)旅游，他們中的一些不文明行為引起了人們的極大關(guān)注。調(diào)查顯示，中國(guó)游客列世界第二不受歡迎的人。為此，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄寫一篇短文，并提出你的建議，呼吁人們文明出行。

1. 不高聲喧嘩；

2. 排隊(duì)候車或就餐；

3. 不隨地吐痰或亂扔垃圾；

4. 不亂涂亂畫。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80 詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3. 參考詞匯：spit v. 吐痰；behavior n. 行為。

With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad, their bad behaviors have become a hot

topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good

tourist? Here are some tips for you.

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Answer 1

【答案】

With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad, their bad behaviors have become a hot topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good tourist? Here are some tips for you.

First, we should keep our voice down while talking with friends in public places. Please wait in line if you want to take a bus or have dinner. Also, don’t spit or drop litter whenever you want. Finally, it’s really bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings.

As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behavior, saying no to those bad habits. While enjoying ourselves, we should not only respect local customs, but also take care of the environment.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求就做文明游客提些建議，呼吁人們文明出行。短文要覆蓋提示的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文中要多用祈使句和一些含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的句子幫助進(jìn)行表達(dá)。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱形式進(jìn)行寫作。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文第一段揭示現(xiàn)象，引入話題；第二段提出了一系列的建議。重點(diǎn)突出，中心明確。每條建議前的副詞用得好，比如：first，also, finally等等。讓讀者一眼就可以看出是幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)；最后一段明確自己的責(zé)任和義務(wù)，并呼吁人們行動(dòng)起來(lái)，保護(hù)環(huán)境，尊重地方習(xí)俗，作文明游客。主旨鮮明突出。