Question

【題目】下面的圖表和漫畫反映了世界上野生動(dòng)物種類的變化情況和原因, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)圖表和漫畫的理解, 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。寫作要點(diǎn)：

1.描述野生動(dòng)物種類的變化趨勢(shì)；

2.分析導(dǎo)致野生動(dòng)物種類變化的原因；

3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的看法和建議。

注意：1. 可參照?qǐng)D表、漫畫及下面文章開頭所給的提示進(jìn)行必要的發(fā)揮；

2.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Many animals are in danger of dying out.

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Answer 1

【答案】Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past three decades. As a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2015.

There are several reasons for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason. Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of wild animals.

In my opinion, it is high time that we should take action to protect them and give wild animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass more laws to forbid killing wild animals. Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.

【解析】

這是一篇圖表作文。本篇要求考生根據(jù)圖表和漫畫反應(yīng)的內(nèi)容講述野生動(dòng)物種類的變化情況和原因。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，下面的圖表和漫畫反映了世界上野生動(dòng)物種類的變化情況和原因, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)圖表和漫畫的理解, 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。寫作要點(diǎn)：

1.描述野生動(dòng)物種類的變化趨勢(shì)；

2.分析導(dǎo)致野生動(dòng)物種類變化的原因；

3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的看法和建議。

第二，人稱為第三人稱。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，描述野生動(dòng)物種類的變化趨勢(shì)。第二段，分析導(dǎo)致野生動(dòng)物種類變化的原因。第三段，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的看法和建議。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ): in danger of ，Apart from，resulted in，take action to do sth，live in harmony with.

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子:which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of wild animals. 虛擬語(yǔ)氣In my opinion, it is high time that we should take action to protect them and give wild animals a good living environment.完全倒裝句 Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接: As a result，In my opinion，In addition.

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。