Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Aunt,

I’m very glad to receive you letter.

Great changes have already been taken place after your departure. Our life is getting better and better. Villagers had moved into big and comfortable houses. But almost all houses have been equipped with telephones. They have bought not only colored TV sets, but also fridges, and so on. Widely roads have been built to connect villages and towns. Some family have got their own trucks and even cars. However, children can now enjoy a very good education.

I hope that you and Uncle Li will come back and have visit to the new village.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Aunt,

I’m very glad to receive you letter.

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Great changes have already been taken place after your departure. Our life is getting better and better. Villagers

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had moved into big and comfortable houses. But almost all houses have been equipped with telephones. They have

have And

bought not only colored TV sets, but also fridges, and so on. Widely roads have been built to connect villages and

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towns. Some family have got their own trucks and even cars. However, children can now enjoy a very good

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education.

I hope that you and Uncle Li will come back and have ∧ visit to the new village.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【1】第一句 you---your

【2】第二句 去掉been

【3】第二句 after→since

【4】第四句had→have

【5】第五句 But→And

【6】第六句 colored→color

【7】第七句 Widely→Wide

【8】第八句 family→families

【9】第九句 However→Besides

【10】第十句 在have和visit中間加a

【解析】

【1】第一句 you---your 考查代詞的用法。這里應(yīng)該使用物主代詞作定語來修飾名詞letter，故將you改為your。

【2】第二句 去掉been 考查動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)。這里take place是不及物動詞短語，沒有被動形式，故將been去掉。

【3】第二句 after→since 考查介詞的用法。這里after的意思是“在……之后”，一般用于過去時和現(xiàn)在時，而句子中的時態(tài)是現(xiàn)在完成時，since的意思是“自從……以來”，用于完成時。故將after改為since。

【4】第四句had→have 考查動詞的用法。此句應(yīng)該和前一句的時態(tài)一樣，都是表示到現(xiàn)在為止，所以應(yīng)該使用現(xiàn)在完成時，故將had改為have。

【5】第五句 But→And 考查并列連詞的用法。這里應(yīng)該是進一步說明房子的狀況，所以應(yīng)該是遞進關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將But改為And。

【6】第六句 colored→color 考查名詞作定語的用法。彩電應(yīng)該是color TV，名詞作定語說明后面名詞的性質(zhì)、用途、類別、材料等等，而colored有“上了顏色的”的意思。故將colored改為color。

【7】第七句 Widely→Wide 考查形容詞的用法。修飾名詞應(yīng)該用形容詞，而副詞用來修飾動詞、形容詞、副詞等。所以應(yīng)該是用形容詞wide來修飾roads，故將Widely改為Wide。

【8】第八句 family→families 此處family前面有Some(在此表示“一些”)，所以family要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故要將family改為families。

【9】第九句 However→Besides 考查副詞的用法。However用來表示轉(zhuǎn)折，而從上下文來看，這里應(yīng)該是進一步說明村子里條件的改善，所以將However改為Besides。

【10】第十句 在have和visit中間加a 考查不定冠詞的用法。have a visit to是“參觀……”的意思。所以在have和visit中間加a。