Question

假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jenny最近身體不舒服，來信向你詢問如何保持健康。
請你給她回信并提出建議。內容如下：
注意合理飲食：多吃魚，豆類等有營養(yǎng)的食品及新鮮蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多的肉和甜食；
多參加體育鍛煉；
保證充足睡眠，不要熬夜，每天至少睡8個小時。
注意：1。詞數(shù)：120左右
2．信的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。
3．參考詞匯：有營養(yǎng)的：nutritious
Dear Jenny
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version
Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.
As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, beans,fresh fruit and vegetables. You should not eat too much meat or too many sweets. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all the time. For example, you can play basketball or swim after school. What’s more, having enough sleep is very important. So I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late. Only in this way can we keep fit.
Yours
Li Hua

解析試題分析:提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如hear from, As we know，all the time和Only in this way can we keep fit.，還運用了stay up 。并注意了句子句子之間的銜接如用such as , Also, For example , What’s more ，at least等等。
考點:提綱類作文。