Question

【題目】高中生在成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中會(huì)碰到一些煩惱。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿，并作為學(xué)生代表在班會(huì)課上發(fā)言。詞數(shù)150左右。

煩惱	解決辦法
外形不美	不必在意，關(guān)注內(nèi)在美
朋友少，不被他人理解	多參加活動(dòng)，多與別人交流
與父母有代溝，經(jīng)常吵架	加強(qiáng)溝通，互相理解
學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好，壓力大	？

注意：

1．開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不記入詞數(shù);

2．語(yǔ)言通順，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。

參考詞匯：內(nèi)在美 inner beauty 除去 get rid of

Boys and girls:

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls:

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. First, some of us are upset about their body styles and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, some of us have fewer friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good. We sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers or classmates. Faced with this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Third, some of us often quarrel with our parents because of the generation gap between us. It is necessary for us to communicate with our parents after school, telling them what we think or what we want to do in the future. Last of all, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】首先審題，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿，并作為學(xué)生代表在班會(huì)課上發(fā)言。任務(wù)中給出的提示信息包含如下內(nèi)容：外形不美，不必在意，關(guān)注內(nèi)在美；朋友少，不被他人理解，多參加活動(dòng)，多與別人交流；與父母有代溝，經(jīng)常吵架，加強(qiáng)溝通，互相理解；學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好，壓力大……抓住了這亮點(diǎn)，我們就抓住了文章的核心內(nèi)容。其次選用正確的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。然后寫(xiě)出單個(gè)句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)，要注意: 要注意: 提示中的內(nèi)容比較泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如: care about關(guān)心，open-minded思想開(kāi)明的。還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good.和定語(yǔ)從句Last of all, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。