Question

9．假如你是李華，一名剛剛進(jìn)入高三的學(xué)生．2013年高考在即，面對(duì)壓力，想和父母說(shuō)說(shuō)心里話，
請(qǐng)你用英文以書信的形式表達(dá)出來(lái)．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

知心話	對(duì)父母的感謝	傾注愛(ài)心，關(guān)心鼓勵(lì)
	對(duì)父母的希望	1．和他們多交流，使自己保持良好狀態(tài)
		2．創(chuàng)造條件，給自己提供實(shí)時(shí)幫助
學(xué)習(xí)打算	考生自擬（至少寫兩點(diǎn)）

注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)．
     2．字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
Dear Mom and Dad，
        The annual College Entrance Examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how
   I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　Yours ever，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Meanwhile，it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me
高分句型二：
What's more，i will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low．
句型一 it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me． 該句中it位于句首作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是that后面跟的從句，該從句為主語(yǔ)從句
句型二 where I used to score low 該句是一個(gè)where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，where在句中作關(guān)系副詞
此外，該文章還有以下重要詞匯：to begin with 首先    after all 畢竟   what's more  而且

解答 Dear Mom and Dad，
    The annual college entrance examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
   To begin with，I am grateful to all the love，care and encouragement you have given me all these years．（感謝父母）Meanwhile，it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me．（高分句型一）In this way，I can always be in a good state in the coming year．Besides，I also hope that you can create necessary conditions，thus providing me with timely help．
   For my part，I am determined to concentrate more time and energy on my study and，if any problem arises，turn to my teachers immediately．What's more，i will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low．（高分句型二）After all，a balanced development is essential in the college entrance examination．（自我打算）
                                                                                                              Yours ever，
                                                                                                              Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一個(gè)圖標(biāo)類書面表達(dá)，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意觀察圖表所提供的信息，盡量要將其所列內(nèi)容清楚表達(dá)；另外考生平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)介的語(yǔ)言將作文表達(dá)清楚．