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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It was a sunny day today and I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing. The moment I entered in the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees come into sight. Attracted by the beauty, I couldn’t stop taking photo. As I wandered along the path, enjoy the beautiful view, I noticed something unpleasantly. Two schoolgirls jumped the fence to pick flowers. Obviously they didn’t realize that their behavior had done great damage on the beauty of the park. Without hesitation, I went up and stopped them politely. Quite embarrassing, the two girls came out immediately. Then we took pictures outside the fence. Seeing that, I smiled and something looked nicer in my eyes.

【答案】

【1】. ... entered in the park ... 去掉in

【2】. ... trees come into sight. come → came

【3】... stop taking photo. photo → photos

【4】... enjoy the beautiful view ... enjoy → enjoying

【5】... something unpleasantly. unpleasantly → unpleasant

【6】... jumped the fence ... jumped后加over

【7】... done great damage on ... on → to

【8】Quite embarrassing ... embarrassing → embarrassed

【9】Then we took pictures ... we → they

【10】... something looked nicer ... something → everything

【解析】

試題分析：本文講的是一個星期天去西安公園春游所發(fā)生的故事。

【1】. ... entered in the park ... 去掉in enter本身含有“in/into”的意思，故去掉in。

【2】. ... trees come into sight. come → came 根據上下文的聯系可知句子應該用一般過去時態(tài)，故把come → came。

【3】... stop taking photo. photo → photos 句意：我不能停止拍照。此處名詞用復數形式，故把photo → photos。

【4】... enjoy the beautiful view ... enjoy → enjoying 此處是現在分詞表示伴隨狀態(tài)，故把enjoy → enjoying。

【5】... something unpleasantly. unpleasantly → unpleasant 句意：我注意到一些不愉快的事情。形容詞修飾不定代詞，故把unpleasantly → unpleasant。

【6】... jumped the fence ... jumped后加over 句意：跳過圍墻。故在jumped后加over。

【7】... done great damage on ... on → to 固定詞組do danage to sb./do sb/ danage，故把on → to 。

【8】Quite embarrassing ... embarrassing → embarrassed 句意：相當尷尬，兩個女孩走出來。過去分詞作主語補足語，表示被動關系。

【9】Then we took pictures ... we → they 句意：然后他們在圍墻外面拍照。故把we → they。

【10】... something looked nicer ... something → everything 句意：看到這個，我微笑著，一切在我眼中看上去更好。故把something → everything。

【知識拓展】

1.表示情感的現在分詞和過去分詞

surprising令人驚訝的，surprised感到驚訝；frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕； moving令人感動的， moved 感動；exciting 令人興奮的，excited 感到興奮；boring令人厭煩的， bored感到厭煩�，F在分詞的主語通常指事物；過去分詞的主語通常指人。比如第7小題，annoying---annoyed 此處表示教授感到煩惱，故把annoying---annoyed。比如第8小題，embarrassing → embarrassed 句意：相當尷尬，兩個女孩走出來。過去分詞作主語補足語，表示被動關系。

2.不能在同一句中出現的詞

enter不能和in/into；repeat和again；return和back；because和so；though/although/while/in spite of/despite（盡管）和but。

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