Question

1．自行車(chē)是公認(rèn)的綠色交通工具，也是我過(guò)最普通的交通工具．但隨著中國(guó)汽車(chē)擁有量的不斷增加，自行車(chē)出行受到了很大的沖擊．假如你是李華，真正參加學(xué)校舉辦的演講比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇講演稿，呼吁大家騎自行車(chē)，享受低碳生活．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．對(duì)環(huán)境的影響；2．對(duì)能源的消耗3．對(duì)健康的影響
注意
1．詞數(shù)：100字左右2．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)出．
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motorcycle．
          ．
So why not call for riding bicycles and enjoy a low-carbon life？
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles
然而，在我看來(lái)，我們應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)更多的人堅(jiān)持騎自行車(chē)．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，riding bicycles does good to our health．第三，騎自行車(chē)多我們的身體有好處．
句型一 in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles 該句中使用了以下重要的短語(yǔ)和固定搭配：in one's opinion 在某人看來(lái)   encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
句型二 riding bicycles does good to our health 該句的主語(yǔ)為現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)充當(dāng)，此時(shí)應(yīng)注意謂語(yǔ)使用單數(shù)，且該句謂語(yǔ)部分使用了一個(gè)固定短語(yǔ)：do good to 對(duì)．．有好處

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
   With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motorcycle．
   However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles．（高分句型一）Firstly，bicycles cause little pollution to the environment．Since a bicycle is much quieter than motorcycle，it doesn't cause noise pollution．Moreover，a bicycle never sends out harmful gas into the air．secondly，either in the process of making bicycles or using them，they consume much less energy than motorcycles．Thirdly，riding bicycles does good to our health．（高分句型二）It is an effective method available to do physical training．riding bicycles can build our body and keep us fit．（闡述理由）
   Due to the reasons mentioned above，it can be concluded that riding bicycles is really good for the individual as well as the whole society．So why not call for riding bicycles and enjoy a low-carbon life？（提出倡議）
   Thank you!

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