Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike了解到中醫(yī)在中國抗擊疫情中起了重要作用，對此很感興趣，請給他回信簡要介紹中醫(yī)。內(nèi)容包括：

1、歷史悠久；

2、中醫(yī)優(yōu)勢（療效好、副作用少、價格低）。

注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；

2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：疫情：epidemic 中醫(yī)；traditional Chinese medicine 副作用：side effect

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad to learn that you are extremely interested in traditional Chinese medicine.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I’m very glad to learn that you are extremely interested in traditional Chinese medicine, because it plays a significant role in fighting against the epidemic in China.

For one thing, the TCM has a long history. As an important part of Chinese culture, it has been attracting much attention from all over the world. For another thing, the TCM, with its unique diagnostic methods and remarkable effects, has been used to treat cancer and other serious diseases. Unlike the Western medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects. Above all, compared with the high fees of the Western medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.

In a word, the TCM has made great contributions to the development of Chinese health care.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給筆友Mike寫信向他介紹中醫(yī)。

第一步：審題。

體裁：信件應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

要點：1 中醫(yī)在中國抗擊疫情中起了重要作用

2 中醫(yī)歷史悠久

3 中醫(yī)的優(yōu)勢：療效好、副作用少、價格低

結(jié)構(gòu)布局： 總分總

第一段，中醫(yī)在中國抗擊疫情中起了重要作用，寫信向你介紹中醫(yī)。

第二段，1 中醫(yī)歷史悠久

2 中醫(yī)優(yōu)勢：療效好，副作用少，價格低

第三段，中醫(yī)在中國健康方面發(fā)揮著重要的作用。

第二步：列重點詞語，詞組（注意好詞的使用）

如：As what you have known, play a key role in, fight against, epidemic, make an introduction, accumulate, impressive, remarkable, side effect, in comparison with, affordable等

第三步：連詞成句（注意好句型的使用，如非謂語動詞，復(fù)合句，注意拼寫和時態(tài)問題）

如：As what you have known, Traditional Chinese Medicine plays a key role in fighting against the epidemic in China.等

第四步：連句成篇（注意銜接詞的使用）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);

3.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡。

第五步：潤色修改。