同學們，在日常的生活學習中，我們從側(cè)面了解了各個行業(yè)的艱辛與魅力，那么你們有自己的職業(yè)規(guī)劃嗎？請按要求以“My dream job” 為題，完成一篇不少于120個單詞的作文。

內(nèi)容包括：

What is your dream job? 2. Give your reasons.

What you should do to achieve your dream.

If I can choose my own profession, I would like to be…

One possible version:

If I can choose my own profession, I would like to be a doctor.

Illnesses and diseases always bring pains and sufferings to us humans, but doctors can help us get rid of them. Doctors are trained to know the causes of different kinds of illnesses and the best ways to cure the patients. They can bring patients from illness to happiness and give the hope to live on.

To be a doctor is not easy for everyone. It requires a kind heart and a difficult process of learning. But I have the faith in realizing my dream and overcome all the difficulties. Misunderstood as doctors may be, they deserve to be respected.

I'll work hard to learn as much as possible, particularly chemistry, mathematics and physics. To realize my dream of becoming a doctor, I will spare my effort without hesitation.

130 words

【解析】

審題：題目中要求寫作內(nèi)容需要包括三點：第一點是什么是你理想的職業(yè)，作者在第一段就直截了當?shù)乇砻髯约豪硐氲穆殬I(yè)是醫(yī)生；第二點是為什么想從事這個職業(yè)，作者在第二段論述了自己的理由，即可以減輕病人的痛苦，給他們帶來快樂；第三點是為了目標職業(yè)將會做出哪些努力，作者先在第三段表明想要成為醫(yī)生要面臨很多困難，然后在最后一段表明自己的決心并表示會努力用功學習。從而可以看出，作者在審題方面做得非常好，非�？垲}。寫作技巧：作者根據(jù)題目中要求來完成寫作任務，條理清晰；文中使用了一些固定短語及搭配： get rid of，live on，have the faith in，deserve to，spare effort 等使文章顯得很干練；文中使用了較多的語法知識，倒裝句Misunderstood as doctors may be, they deserve to be respected.，目的狀語從句 To realize my dream of becoming a doctor, I will spare my effort without hesitation.，不定式引導的主語從句To be a doctor is not easy for everyone.這些從句等語法的使用提升了文章的檔次，將基本要點清晰地呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前，同時也顯示較高的語法知識點使用能力。問題指出：文章缺乏連接詞，句子與句子之間銜接不夠順暢，可適當增加“Besides”“While”“Firstly”“Secondly”“As far as I am concerned”等連接詞使行文更加流暢。

考點：考查材料類議論文作文。

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