1.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文.短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Dear Peter,
I have received your e-mail.I am very exciting at the good news that you have admitted into Harvard.First I'd like to offer my congratulation to you on your great success.
As you know,I'm busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard but have to stay up later doing piles of papers.Therefore,I'm always feeling stressed out because of my efforts seem to be fruitless,which had made me upset and tired.Will you be kindly enough to give some advice on how to do?
I would appreciate that if you could write back to me as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua

分析 作者祝賀筆友被哈佛大學(xué)錄取,并介紹自己目前的學(xué)習(xí)情況且征求建議.
很高興你已經(jīng)被哈佛大學(xué)錄取,而我還在忙著為高考做準(zhǔn)備,一堆一堆的試卷讓我很有壓力,害怕一切的努力都會(huì)白費(fèi),你可以給我一些建議嗎?

解答 Dear Peter,
I have received your e-mail.I am very exciting at the good news that you have∧admitted into Harvard.First
I'd like to offer my congratulation to you on your great success.
As you know,I'm busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard but
have to stay up later doing piles of papers.Therefore,I'm always feeling stressed out becauseof my efforts seem to Be fruitless,which had made me upset and tired.Will you be kindly enough to give some advice on how to do?
I would appreciate that if you could write back to me as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
1:exciting 改為excited.考查形容詞辨析.修飾I做表語用excited表示"興奮的".
2:admitted 前加 been.考查謂語動(dòng)詞的語態(tài). 主語you 和謂語動(dòng)詞admit是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,所以admitted 前加 been.
3:congratulation 改為 congratulations.考查名詞.表示祝賀常用名詞的復(fù)數(shù).
4:but 改為 and.考查連詞.Day after day I work very hard 表示"我一天天的努力學(xué)習(xí)"和 have to stay up later doing piles of papers之間是并列關(guān)系,所以用and表達(dá)并列關(guān)系.
5:later 改為 late.考查副詞.用stay up late表示"熬夜".later表示"以后".
6:去掉of.考查連詞.my efforts seem to be fruitless是個(gè)句子,所以去掉 because 后的 of,引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句.
7:had 改為 has.考查時(shí)態(tài).本文討論的是現(xiàn)在的情況,所以全文為現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),因此用 has.
8:kindly改為kind.考查形容詞.做 you be 的表語用形容詞kind.
9:how 改為 what.考查語義.作 to do 邏輯賓語,表示"做什么"用what.
10:that 改為 it.考查代詞.固定句式I'd appreciate it if…表示"如能…將不勝感激",it代指 if從句,做形式賓語.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò).
動(dòng)詞appreciate,find,feel,consider,make,believe等后面有賓語補(bǔ)足語的時(shí)候,則需要用it做形式賓語而將賓語從句后置.例句:
I think it necessary that we take plenty of hot water every day.

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