Question

14．學(xué)校英語論壇針對目前城市交通擁堵、污染嚴(yán)重的問題進行了"治堵方案大家談"的討論．以下是討論概要．

寫作內(nèi)容
請根據(jù)以上概要寫一篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．存在的問題；
2．解決的方案；
3．方案的好處．
寫作要求       
只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容．
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)       
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文為議論文．本文寫作主題為：治堵方案大家談．
寫作要點為：1．存在的問題；
2．解決的方案；
3．方案的好處．

解答 Version 1
      Nowadays，the problem of traffic jams in cities is as serious as that of air pollution．Some suggested solutions to these problems include a reduction in the use of private cars and an increase in the practice of car-pooling，where one car is shared by several workmates or friends．In addition，the government could improve the public transport system in order to make it more convenient for people．The government should also encourage cycling by building more green lanes．This will help save money，time and energy as well as improve the environment．

Version 2
       The problems of traffic jams and air pollution have aroused increasing attention recently．Some of the possible solutions to these problems are as follows．First，car owners could share their cars with their friends and workmates，thus reducing the use of private cars．Second，the government could make it more convenient for its citizens to use public transport by improving the public transport system and encourage cycling by building more green lanes．By taking the above measures，we could surely save money，time and energy as well as improve the environment．

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