Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假期中你外出旅游時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)許多不文明行為，如隨地吐痰、亂涂亂畫、亂丟垃圾等，請你給Beautiful China編輯部寫一封信，呼吁人們提高素質(zhì)、文明出行。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.你所看到的不文明行為及危害；

2．為建設(shè)美麗中國，提出你的倡議(至少兩點(diǎn))。

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

4．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100～120；

參考詞匯：吐痰spit；刻畫 scratch；不文明行為immoral behaviors

Dear editor，

I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear editor,

I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation.

I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places.Some people spit at will wherever they went; some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots, which did great damage to them.

In my opinion, it’s high time we should take action to help improve the situation. First, certain laws should be passed to ensure people won’t damage the environment. Second, our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment. Last but not least, we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did.

Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文寫作。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places.運(yùn)用固定短語so many；Some people spit at will wherever they went; some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots, which did great damage to them.運(yùn)用定語從句；In my opinion, it’s high time we should take action to help improve the situation.運(yùn)用虛擬語氣；Last but not least, we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did.運(yùn)用短語Last but not least；Second, our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。