Question

10．假如你叫李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友Jack來信說他要來中國旅游．請你根據(jù)下列要求給Jack寫一封回信．
1、歡迎Jack來華，邀請他到家做客．
2、詢問他是否可以到你的班級來做一個演講，介紹英國文化．
3、給他提一點中國旅游方面的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
      ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)文章所給的信息提示寫一封邀請信．寫作要點包括向Jack發(fā)出邀請，包含三個要點：邀請來家做客、到班級做場報告并給出在中國旅游的建議等．寫作時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱和第二人稱．
重要短語：give sb some advice about doing sth給某人一些關(guān)于做某事的建議；pay a visit to sp．參觀某地；make a speech about（做一場關(guān)于…的講座/報告）；expect to do sth期待做某事；recommend doing sth推薦做某事；places of interest風景名勝；
高分句型：
1．My mother said that she would make our home-made dinner for you，which tastes very delicious．本句中包含一個that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和一個which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句．
2．I wonder if you can come to my class to make a speech about your English culture and customs because my classmates are expecting to see you and communicate with you in English．本句中有一個if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm very glad to know that you are going to visit China during your summer holiday．Since China is a big country，I'd like to give you some advice about visiting China．I sincerely hope you can pay a visit to my home，where everyone of my family welcome you warmly．My mother said that she would make our home-made dinner for you，which tastes very delicious．（高分句型）I wonder if you can come to my class to make a speech about your English culture and customs because my classmates are expecting to see you and communicate with you in English．（高分句型）
 If you want to travel in our country，I recommend visiting many places of interest，such as Xi'an，Beijing，Guilin and so on，where there are many famous sites for you to visit．（提出建議）
I'm looking forward to your coming．（表達期望）
Yours，
Lihua

點評 對于書信類的書面表達不僅要在表達內(nèi)容上，也要在書面形式上多下功夫．一定要注意單詞拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，字跡工整，卷面力求整潔，正確使用標點符號，使別人看起來耳目一新，具有整體美感，并且要使用一些高級句式，主從復(fù)合句等來提高自己的作文檔次．