Question

最近，越來越多的學(xué)生在校外租房而不愿住大宿舍。請根據(jù)下面提示，一分為二地用英語寫一篇短文，說說兩者各自的好處與壞處，并表明自己的觀點。詞數(shù)100左右。
1. 學(xué)習(xí)時間；  2. 安全；  3. 自由性；  4. 與同學(xué)交往；  5. 學(xué)習(xí)效果。
注意：可從其他角度闡述，但兩方面的理由都至少要有兩條。
要求：字跡工整，段落清晰。
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

不唯一
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of cause it is safer.
A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting houses to live alone , it’s better for studyas you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.
As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.
Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

解析試題分析：本文是一篇議論文，首先表明租房和住大宿舍有什么優(yōu)點和缺點，將對此現(xiàn)象表明自己的觀點提升為要點，更為重要進(jìn)行闡述，再舉例對自己支持與否的說明，寫作中使用萬能句型造句，寫作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運用英語語言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運用單詞的能力，對所學(xué)語法的掌握程度，能否按照英語習(xí)慣正確表達(dá)所要表達(dá)的意思的能力等等。
考點：提綱作文
點評：提醒考生應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感。