Question

【題目】最近，你們班召開了以“我的中國夢”為主題的班會活動。請寫一篇日記，記述班會情況及自己的感受。內容要點如下：

1.每位同學都暢談了自己對中國夢的理解；

2.你談到了自己的夢想；

3.如何實現(xiàn)自己的夢想。

注意事項：

1.短文詞數(shù)不少于100;

2.不可逐條翻譯;

3.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

December 20th Friday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

December 20th Friday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.

To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，要點是寫一篇日記記敘以“我的中國夢”為主題的班會活動，包括班級每位同學以及自己對夢想的理解。短文應該主要用一般過去時，主要用第一人稱介紹活動內容。還應該盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：talked enthusiastically about; come true; To realize my dream .以及一個部分倒裝句“Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. ”和一個完全倒裝句“Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.”這些都很不錯。