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【題目】外教Johnson開設(shè)了一個英語輔導(dǎo)班(English Tutorial)，按照學(xué)生實(shí)際需要進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)。參加者須根據(jù)個人實(shí)際情況提出申請并選擇輔導(dǎo)內(nèi)容。假定你是李華，請給外教寫一封電子郵件，
要點(diǎn)如下：1）介紹個人情況；
2）說明輔導(dǎo)意向（如：口語、語法、寫作、文化知識籌其中的一項(xiàng)或幾項(xiàng)）；
3）表達(dá)愿望。
注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3）開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好。
Dear Mr.Johnson,
I am writing to you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.
Looking forward to you reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Dear Mr.Johnson,

I am writing to you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.

As a Senior Grade 3 student,I think I'm doing well in English because I always get good marks in written English tests.But I still think I am not a perfect learner because I'm not so good at spoken English,and that is what troubles me most.And when I listen to native speakers,I find it hard to catch what they talk about.Whenever I speak English,I often make some mistakes,which annoys me.So,I want to be a member in the speaking tutorial so that I can improve my spoken English and communicate better with others.I'm sure I'll do much better in it with your help.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。同學(xué)們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.由于主題是根據(jù)個人實(shí)際情況提出申請并選擇輔導(dǎo)內(nèi)容。所以通篇的主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。2. 文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了：a.介紹個人情況；b.說明輔導(dǎo)意向；c.表達(dá)愿望。3.要拓展內(nèi)容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What's more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。