Question

IV.短文改錯(cuò)假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、 刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧ ) ，并在其下面 寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修 改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

My classmate Liu Hong is an warm-hearted girl. She is good at studying,dancing and playing piano. After hear Sichuan earthquake,she felt very sad about it. She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people. First she calls her friends up and came up with having a benefit show. Then she handed out advertisement with her friends or put up signs asking people to watch. Luckily,she did very good. A lot of people were moved and gave their hands to Sichuan people. At the last,she raised 5,000 yuan. She gave up all the money to the quake-hit areas.

Answer 1

IV. My classmate Liu Hong is an (a) warm-hearted girl. She is good at studying,dancing and playing (∧the) piano. After hear (hearing) Sichuan earthquake,she felt very sad about it. She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people. First she help calls (called) her friends up and came up with having a benefit show. Then she handed out advertisement (advertisements) with her friends or and put up signs asking people to watch. Luckily,she did very good (well) . A lot of people pie were moved and gave their hands to Sichuan people. At the (╲) last,she raised   5. 000 yuan. She gave up (away) all the money away to the quake-hit areas.