Question

15．假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華．你校擬選拔一些優(yōu)秀學生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語．你希望參加此活動．請根據以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：
◎對此活動的認識（如對本人、學生及社會的益處等）
◎個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）
◎你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導等）
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內容充實、行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數；
4．卷面2分．
參考詞匯：
晨曦希望小學Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．
As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對活動的認識）
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個人優(yōu)勢）
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計劃）
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是書信類作文，根據所給要點內容給學校寫一封申請信，申請用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語．屬于提綱作文．時態(tài)為一般現在時．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：As far as I am concerned （據我所知），result in （導致），be qualified for （有資格，合格），be independent （獨立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulate interests in（激發(fā)…的興趣）．
As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】
That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】
What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對活動的認識）
       I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個人優(yōu)勢）
       My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計劃）
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．