Question

最近中國多個地區(qū)出現(xiàn)霧霾天氣，某中學高三（1）班就此話題組織了一次班會活動，假設你是該班的通訊員，請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英文報道給學校刊物。

時間：2014.1.5下午第三節(jié)	地點：學校會議室	主持人：班長王濤
參與者：高三（1）班師生	主題：還我藍天白云
活動目的	認識日益嚴峻的空氣污染問題，增強環(huán)保意識。
活動流程	1. 利用PPT展示圖片及調查結果：空氣污染致我國每年約25萬人過早死亡，數(shù)萬兒童健康受危害； 2. 小組討論：如何應對霧霾天氣； 3. 班主任點評。
活動小結	……

【寫作要求】

只能用5個句子表達全部內容。文章開頭已給出，不計入總句數(shù)。

【評分標準】

句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。

As the atmospheric pollution worsens and the air quality declines, smoggy weather has occurred in many parts of China.

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Answer 1

As the atmospheric pollution worsen and the air quality declines, smoggy weather has occurred in many parts of China. With the theme of “Bring back a blue sky and white clouds”, a class meeting hosted by our monitor Wang Tao was held in the Meeting Hall among all the teachers and students of Class 1, Senior3 during the 2nd section class on the afternoon of Jan. 5, 2014. The activity aimed to get the students informed of the fact of the increasingly serious smoggy weather and raise our awareness of environmental protection. In the class meeting, the PPT was used to present some pictures and related survey results, which show that air pollution in China causes about 250,000 early deaths per year and tens of thousands of children’ s health may get threatened. Then, we discussed in groups about how to deal with air pollution and then, our head teacher gave some comments. It is the meeting that makes us aware of the importance of clean air and determine to help fight against air pollution.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)寫作要求可知考生寫一篇英文報道給學�？�物介紹班會內容。班會內容包括時間、地點、參與者，活動主題、流程和小結。由于是敘述介紹班會內容，時態(tài)應選用一般過去時�？忌鷮懽鲿r應注意單詞的拼寫，句子要符合語法規(guī)則，靈活運用句式增添文章文采。亮點解析：文章用五個復合句來完成班會內容，句式靈活，恰到好處。比如第一句……h(huán)osted by our monitor Wang Ta（班會由班長主持）過去分詞作后置定語；第二句中介紹了活動的目的很好的結合了短語be aimed to do sth（旨在做某事） 以及get sb informed of sth(使某人了解)； raise our awareness of environmental protection.（提高環(huán)境保護意思）等等與環(huán)保相關的表達；第三句中又成功的運用了非限制性定語從句；第五句中利用強調句型再次強調了會議的重要性。這些高級而又有效的句式使用增加了文章的文采。

考點：英文報道的寫作。