Question

假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)生活部的部長(zhǎng), Lucy。你要代表學(xué)生給校長(zhǎng)反映對(duì)學(xué)校食堂的看法，并提出建議

滿(mǎn)意之處：1.提供很多種類(lèi)的食物； 2.飯菜價(jià)格便宜，味道可口； 3.食堂環(huán)境已經(jīng)改善

不滿(mǎn)意之處：1.食物分量不足； 2.食堂的座位不夠，一些學(xué)生吃飯時(shí)沒(méi)有座位。

建議：希望學(xué)校會(huì)考慮增添些座位；改進(jìn)飯菜的質(zhì)量；改善服務(wù)

要求： 1. 注意使用建議信的文體和委婉句式.

       2. 寫(xiě)作時(shí),要包括所列的要點(diǎn),但不要逐句翻譯.

       3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)出。           

4.  作文的字?jǐn)?shù)在120左右。       

 詞匯：  食堂 canteen  改善improve  質(zhì)量quality

Dear Headmaster,

    I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. .                               

 

Yours sincerely,

Lucy

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,

     I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. I wonder if you will not mind me writing to ask if you have thought about the following things. On behalf of all the students, I am writing to you to give our opinions about the canteen.

     Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food. And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of service they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as well. Some students can not find the seats when eating.

     Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.

                                                                     

 Yours,

Lucy

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