【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Music is the universal language to all human beings, it plays a very important part in our life. It can make us life more colourfully and help us to relax ourselves. Without music, our world would be as a wild desert.

There are different variety of music, such as popular music, classical music, country music, jazz music, rap music, but rock music.

Of all the music, I like popular music better. For the one thing, with beautiful melody, it is pleasant to hear; for another, most popular music deals the topics of love and friendship, which appeals to us young people.

【答案】

【1】第一句 it---which

【2】第二句 us---our

【3】第二句 colourfully---colourful

【4】第三句 as---like

【5】第四句 variety---varieties

【6】第四句 but---and

【7】第五句 better-- best

【8】第六句 for one thing

【9】第七句 在deal后加with

【10】第七句 appeals---appeal

【解析】

【1】第一句 it---which 考查關(guān)系代詞的用法。 前面用逗號(hào)說明后面要用從句，故應(yīng)用which變成一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代上文中提及的事。

【2】第二句 us---our 考查物主代詞的用法。在這里life前要用物主代詞our，不能用人稱代詞的賓格us。故將us改為our。

【3】第二句 colourfully---colourful 考查形容詞的用法。make sth + adj. 表示“使……怎么樣”的意思。

【4】第三句 as---like 考查介詞的用法。be like 是“像……一樣”，而as 后面指的是做什么人或物。

【5】第四句 variety---varieties 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)的用法。此處前面用了There are different，故variety應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，即：varieties.

【6】第四句 but---and 此處的連詞應(yīng)該是并列關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故改為and。

【7】第五句 better-- best 考查形容詞最高級(jí)的用法，前面用了Of all the music，限定了范圍，故后面要表示的是我最喜歡的，所以要把better改為best。

【8】第六句 for one thing首先，是固定搭配。此處the多余，故去掉the。

【9】第七句 在deal后加with，deal是不及物動(dòng)詞，和with連用可跟賓語(yǔ)。

【10】第七句 appeals---appeal。因?yàn)閣hich在這里指代前面的the topics，故which后的動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以appeal要用原形。

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