Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李明，你的新西蘭筆友Tom將于八月來四川旅游，特來信詢問有關(guān)旅游景點(diǎn)的情況。請根據(jù)下表所提供的要點(diǎn)，寫一封回信，并表示盼望他的到來。

旅游資源	許多世界著名的風(fēng)景名勝，如：九寨溝(那里湖水清澈見底；色彩斑斕)，都江堰水利工程(2000多年歷史；仍在發(fā)揮作用）
相關(guān)信息	氣候適宜，交通方便

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式及開頭已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：省份—province；都江堰水利工程—Dujiangyan Irrigation Project九寨溝—Jiuzhaigou

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and you can enjoy many world — famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求給朋友回信。給來四川旅游的新西蘭筆友Tom講述一些有關(guān)旅游景點(diǎn)的情況。書信是同學(xué)們熟悉的寫作體裁，這使得文章的寫作更加容易。在寫作前要確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，根據(jù)本文要求可以判斷應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)必須至少包括表格中包括的要點(diǎn)：1. 許多世界著名的風(fēng)景名勝，如：九寨溝(那里湖水清澈見底；色彩斑斕)，都江堰水利工程(2000多年歷史；仍在發(fā)揮作用）。 2. 氣候適宜，交通方便。寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，選擇適當(dāng)表示順序的詞來進(jìn)行上下文的銜接，以增加文章的可讀性和層次性。此外，還要盡量使用高級詞匯和多種句式來提高文章檔次。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and you can enjoy many world — famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.一句話明確說明了四川旅游景點(diǎn)，并列舉了著名景點(diǎn)，言簡意賅。

Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful.句子使用了介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.過渡詞的使用增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。