Question

假設(shè)你是李平，開學(xué)初，老師和家長都要求你住校，而你卻喜歡走讀。請根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容，用英語給某英文報紙編輯寫封信，請求給予指導(dǎo)。

老師和家長的理由:                  李平的理由:

1. 方便問問題                        1. 晚上有更多的自習(xí)時間

2. 晚自習(xí)時間更能保證                2. 學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容可以自由支配

3. 培養(yǎng)獨立生活的能力                3. 可以看電視調(diào)節(jié)一下生活

注意；1.信的開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.詞數(shù)；100左右；

3.參考詞匯；住校 board at school

Dear Editor,,

I’m a student of Senior Two.______________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m a student of Senior Two. At the beginning of this term, my parents and teachers asked me to board at school. They say I can ask questions whenever I haveany.Besides,they think boarding at school will make it possible for me to make full use of my night time, and I can also develop the ability to look after myself.

However, I have my own thougts.Stayng at home in the evening ,I can make use of my time freely and learn what I’d like to .At the same time, I can watch TV for a little time. After all, study doesn’t mean everything. I really don’t know how to do it. Please give me your advice!

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。