Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Terry要來北京一所高中任教，請你介紹城市交通情況，以便來時出行，請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 交通工具（出租車、地鐵、公交等）；

2. 比較利弊。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Terry,

I’m glad that you will come to work in our country. There are many means of transportation in Beijing for you to go about. You can take a taxi, which is available 24 hours a day. It is fast, comfortable, and convenient, but it is expensive. If you don’t go in a hurry, you can take the underground or buses, which are cheap. The disadvantage is that they are usually crowded, especially during the rush hour. If you want to go sightseeing, you can take a special bus. Its upper story has a good view and it passes most famous places of interest.

Looking forward to seeing you soon!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類作文，主要是給美國朋友Terry寫一封郵件，介紹城市交通情況，以便來時出行。內(nèi)容包括：1. 交通工具（出租車、地鐵、公交等）；2. 比較利弊。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如go about，take a taxi，in a hurry，go sightseeing，places of interest，look forward to；還運用句型：You can take a taxi, which is available 24 hours a day. 和If you don’t go in a hurry, you can take the underground or buses, which are cheap.這兩句運用了非限定性定語從句；The disadvantage is that they are usually crowded, especially during the rush hour.這句話運用了表語從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如but，if，and等等。