【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞作斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

How time flies! I can never forget how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates played table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to play just as good. Later on, I often watch them carefully to learn their techniques.

Then I kept practicing hardly until I became too confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of term, I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud for this experience. It helps me realize that I can fulfill our potential but achieve our goals through hard work.

【答案】

【1】how改為why

【2】played改為playing

【3】good改為well

【4】watch改為watched

【5】hardly改為hard

【6】去掉too

【7】end后面加the

【8】for改為of

【9】I改為we

【10】but改為and

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】how改為why 句意：時(shí)間過得真快��！我無法忘記我為什么會成為一個(gè)乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。連詞how表示方式，而本文都在敘述原因。

【2】played改為playing 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。短語see sb doing sth看見某人正在做某事，該結(jié)構(gòu)表示doing的動(dòng)作和see同時(shí)發(fā)生；句意：我上高中的第一天，我就看見很多同學(xué)在打乒乓球。

【3】good改為well�？疾楦痹~。在英語中用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞。本句中的well修飾動(dòng)詞play。短語as well as和…一樣好。句意：對于他們的技巧很驚訝，我決定也要和他們打得一樣好。

【4】watch改為watched 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文敘述的是我學(xué)習(xí)打乒乓球的事情，屬于過去發(fā)生的事情，所以都要使用一般過去時(shí)。

【5】hardly改為hard 考查副詞。副詞hardly幾乎不；hard努力；句意：我不斷地努力練習(xí)，知道我有足夠自信去挑戰(zhàn)那些乒乓球打的好的人。

【6】去掉too 句意：我不斷地努力練習(xí)，知道我有足夠自信去挑戰(zhàn)那些乒乓球打的好的人。如果使用了too，會引起誤解，因?yàn)閠oo…to…表示“太…而不能…”。

【7】end后面加the 考查冠詞。短語at the end of the term在那個(gè)學(xué)期結(jié)束的時(shí)候，在名詞term前面添加定冠詞the表示特指。

【8】for改為of 考查形容詞短語。短語be proud of…對…感到自豪。句意：我對自己這次經(jīng)歷很自豪。

【9】I改為we 考查代詞。句意：這幫助我意識到我們可以通過努力挖掘我們的潛力并實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)。根據(jù)句中的our可知應(yīng)該使用同樣表示復(fù)數(shù)意思的單詞we。

【10】but改為and 考查連詞。句意：這幫助我意識到我們可以通過努力挖掘我們的潛力并實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)。上下文之間存在并列關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

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