Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students sleep

less than nine hours every night. One main reason lies at students’ bad habits.

Too much homework is given by school teachers is another main cause. Some students

are absent-minded while doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time.

The third cause is that some students have to get up earlier on weekday to get to school that was far away from home. Experts think an amount of homework for the students should be cut down. Beside, teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time. Only in this way can the students improve our study efficiency.

Answer 1

1.basing變?yōu)?based

2.at 變?yōu)閕n

3.is去掉

4.wasting變?yōu)?waste

5.weekday 變?yōu)閣eekdays

6.was 改為is

7.an改為the

8.beside變?yōu)閎esides

9.make前加to

10.our變?yōu)閠heir

【解析】

1.小題1】“ 以. . .為基礎(chǔ)”be based on something，去掉主語和be動詞，過去分詞作定語，因此basing變?yōu)?based。

2.小題2】“在于”lie in ，介詞使用錯誤，因此at 變?yōu)閕n。

3.小題3】“太多的作業(yè)”后面的第一個be動詞去掉，非謂語動詞given作定語，表示老師布置的作業(yè)，因此is去掉。

4. waste。

5.小題5】工作日是好幾天，因此用復(fù)數(shù)形式，weekday 變?yōu)閣eekdays。

6.小題6】時態(tài)錯誤，用一般現(xiàn)在時表示事實，was 改為is。

7.小題7】作業(yè)量，表示特指，用定冠詞，an改為the 。

8.小題8】另外老師應(yīng)該鼓勵學(xué)生充分利用業(yè)余時間。而beside是指“旁邊“，因此beside變?yōu)閎esides 。

9.小題9】“鼓勵某人做某事”encourage somebody to do，因此make前加to 。

10.小題10】學(xué)生們高效提高他們的學(xué)業(yè)，代詞our變?yōu)閠heir。

考點：短文改錯