Question

針對目前高三學生學習壓力較大的現(xiàn)狀，有人以“Effective Ways to Release the Stress”為題于上周調(diào)查采訪了五個學校的500名高三學生。請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果的圖表寫一份報告，并再談?wù)勛约夯蛏磉呁瑢W釋放壓力的有效方法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：120左右；

      2.調(diào)查報告的題目和開頭已為你寫好(不記入總詞數(shù))。

      3.參考詞匯：心理咨詢室the psychological consulting office

Answer 1

Effective Ways to Release the Stress

Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies．In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．Altogether 500 students were interviewed，and some if interesting results were as follows：About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by doing sports．They play football，for instance．Meanwhile，another forty—five percent of them release their stress by listening to different kinds of music．Interestingly，the rest twenty percent of them usually get help from the school psychological consulting office．

When I’m stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．Then I’ll have a good sleep．In this way，I’ll feel relaxed and forget all about my worries．

解析:

根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點概括完整，內(nèi)容充實而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感；要用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然。寫出內(nèi)涵意思，本文最大的特點就是想象力十分豐富，文章要有血有肉，無論是長短句的搭配，還是從句的使用，都要做到恰當。