Question

有毒食品致病甚至致死的事例經(jīng)常見諸報端，目前三鹿奶粉更是鬧得人心惶惶�，F(xiàn)請你以“Let’s all go out for food safety”為標題根據(jù)下表提示完成一篇短文。

話  題	食品安全已經(jīng)引起極大關(guān)注
原  因	廠商唯利是圖，生產(chǎn)偽劣垃圾食品
	濫用農(nóng)藥和添加劑
認真對待食品安全	廠商：既關(guān)注利潤，也關(guān)注質(zhì)量
	監(jiān)督員：嚴控安全標準，嚴罰不良廠商
	消費者：盡量選擇綠色食品

注意：①避免直譯，要求層次清楚，內(nèi)容連貫。  ②字數(shù)120字左右。

參考詞匯：添加劑addictive    嚴厲severely     監(jiān)督員supervisor   消費者consumer

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Answer 1

Let us all go out for food safety

It is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths. Sanlu Milk Powder is a good example at present. Therefore, food safety had been drawing the public’s great attention.

Food problems mainly lie in the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack social conscience. Centering on money, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, other producers are short of common sense on food safety, thus poison and addictive abuse pollutes food.

For the sake of health, we must take food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay more attention to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secondly, food supervisors shall operate strict food standards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to regular markets to choose green food.

解析:

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