Question

學(xué)習(xí)的方式通常有兩種：獨(dú)立完成和合作探究。兩種方式各有特點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team.”為題，按照以下提示寫一篇英語短文：
1. 獨(dú)立完成: 自行安排、自己解決問題。
2. 合作完成：一起討論、相互學(xué)習(xí)。
3. 我喜歡的方式和理由。
注意: 詞數(shù)100—120，文章的題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Working individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done._______________________________
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Answer 1

Working individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done.  One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team ,which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experience with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.

試題分析：本篇是議論文，討論獨(dú)立完成和合作探究的特點(diǎn)，這種文章一般層次比較清晰，第一段獨(dú)立完成的好處，第二段是合作探究的好處，第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是盡量使語言多樣化；自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章觀點(diǎn)明確，要點(diǎn)齊備，句式富有變化：One is to work individually. 這句話用了不定式做表語，In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. 這句話用疑問詞+不定式做賓語， People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. 這句話用了定語從句，they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.這句話用了不定式和過去分詞， I prefer to work in a team ,which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experience with them. 這句話用了定語從句，As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. 這句話用了狀語從句，還有文章還使用了What’s more, Besides,Personally,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。