Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

近來(lái)，不少大學(xué)新生在入學(xué)體檢中診斷出（be diagnosed with）患有高血壓（high blood pressure,），高血脂（high blood fat）等老年病。請(qǐng)針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀銓?duì)高中學(xué)生就如何保持身體健康提出你的看法及建議。

保持健康的重要性。

保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜，保持飲食平衡，避免吃含糖量高、脂肪含量高的食物。多鍛煉，強(qiáng)身健體，減輕工作壓力。改掉不良習(xí)慣。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于100。

Answer 1

【答案】

When new college students are having physical examinations ,many of them are diagnosed with high blood fat and high blood pressure that are commonly found among old people. This has aroused considerable public concern.

As we all know, health is far more important than wealth。Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. On the contrary, poor health leads to nothing. Since health is so important, how to keep good health?

Firstly, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet. So we should avoid eating food with lots of sugar and fat. Secondly, we’d better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Besides, we have to avoid too much work pressure. Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. In conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above and keep a good mood, we will have good health.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文。此類作文在構(gòu)思上沒有挑戰(zhàn)，重要的是遣詞造句以及合適的過渡句及連接詞的選用。本文要點(diǎn)已給出：1. 近來(lái)，不少大學(xué)新生在入學(xué)體檢中診斷出（be diagnosed with）患有高血壓（high blood pressure,），高血脂（high blood fat）等老年病。2. 保持健康的重要性：好的身體才可以保證我們享受生活實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)。3. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜，保持飲食平衡，避免吃含糖量高、脂肪含量高的食物。多鍛煉，強(qiáng)身健體，減輕工作壓力。改掉不良習(xí)慣。

所以文章分為三段，第一段介紹學(xué)生體檢結(jié)果。第二段敘述保持健康的重要性。第三段重點(diǎn)描述保持健康的方法。