Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖片，寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：

       1．描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；

       2．說(shuō)出其中的寓意；

       3．發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。

       注意：

       1．可適當(dāng)增添內(nèi)容，使文章層次分明，行文連貫。

       2．字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。

       3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好【不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)】

Answer 1

【猜題理由】近年來(lái)，由于父母對(duì)孩子的期望值過(guò)高導(dǎo)致家長(zhǎng)打罵甚至體罰孩子的現(xiàn)象時(shí)有發(fā)生，社會(huì)上相繼出現(xiàn)了“虎媽”“狼父”“鷹爸”等現(xiàn)象。此話題普遍受到關(guān)注，與中學(xué)生息息相關(guān)，符合高考命題的要求。

【構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥】采用二段成文法。第一段對(duì)給出的圖畫(huà)做簡(jiǎn)要的描述；第二段闡明圖畫(huà)所反映的社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)及哲理，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

【參考范文】

As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing. However once there is no support，the tree is broken off. In fact, it reflects a common phenomenon: many parents take care of their children too much.

In our daily life，some parents often take unnecessary action，which will lead to an undesirable result in the long run. Children need not only support and care but also challenges of difficulties and experiences of hardships. Too much care is not helpful to their growth and development. Put ting yourself in their shoes, as children grows up, parents should give them more spare to deal with their own things independently.(113words)