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8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文．短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
The other day my parents and I paid a one-day visit on Qingdao．
We first went to the scenic spot knowing as Zhan Bridge，where we took much pictures．Then we toured around the city by bus．I was deeply attracted by it's clean streets and tidy houses in a combined eastern and western style．The local people were friendly and politely．I was touched by those who offer their seats to the old on the bus．At the noon，we had a big meal in a seaside restaurant．After that，we sailed to an island called Xiaoqingdao．The scenery there was amazed beyond description．Not until 5p．m．we set off back unwillingly．
You can't imagine how great fun we had in Qingdao．If you're free this summer，don't hesitate to go there．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述作者去青島旅行的經(jīng)歷．
前幾天父母和我去青島旅行，我們?nèi)チ藯�橋和小青島．青島的街道很干凈，人們很友好，他們經(jīng)常在公共汽車上給老人讓座．這非常讓我感動(dòng)．

解答 The other day my parents and I paid a one-day visit on Qingdao．We first went to the scenic spot knowing as Zhan Bridge，where we took much pictures．Then we toured around the city by bus．I was deeply attracted by it's clean streets and tidy houses in a combined eastern and western style． The local people were friendly and politely．I was touched by those who offer their seats to the old on the bus．At the noon，we had a big meal in a seaside restaurant．After that，we sailed to an island called Xiaoqingdao．The scenery there was amazed beyond description．Not until 5 p．m．∧we set off back unwillingly．You can't imagine how great fun we had in Qingdao．If you're free this summer，don't hesitate to go there．
 解析：
1．on-to．考查介詞．固定短語pay a visit to sp表示"去某地參觀"，所以用介詞to．
2．knowing-known．考查非謂語動(dòng)詞．know做定語，修飾the scenic spot，二者之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用know的過去分詞known．
3．much-many．考查可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)的修飾詞．修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)pictures用 many．
4．it's-its．考查代詞．it's表示"它是"；its   表示"它的"，本句表示"它的干凈的街道"，所以用物主代詞 its．
5．politely-polite．考查形容詞和副詞辨析．做 The local people were 的表語，和形容詞friendly 并列用形容詞polite．
6．offer-offered．考查謂語動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)主句I was touched 的時(shí)態(tài)可知定語從句的謂語動(dòng)詞用過去式offered．
7．去掉the．考查冠詞．固定短語At  noon表示"在中午"．
8．a(chǎn)mazed-amazing．考查單詞辨析．修飾主語The scenery 應(yīng)該用amazing，表示"那里的風(fēng)景是令人驚喜的"．
9．we前加did．考查倒裝．Not until 位于句首，主句用部分倒裝，即疑問倒裝，所以we前加did．
10．how-what．考查感嘆句．great fun 是名詞短語所以用what引導(dǎo)這個(gè)感嘆句．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
部分倒裝是指將謂語動(dòng)詞的一部分如助動(dòng)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞置于主語之前．
1、否定副詞如no，not，never，seldom，little，hardly，以及含有no，not的短語放在句首時(shí)，句子要部分倒裝．
 Never in my life have I heard such a thing．
2、以否定詞開頭的關(guān)聯(lián)結(jié)構(gòu)．如：No sooner…than…，Hardly/scarcely…when…，Not only…but also，Not until…
Not until late in the evening did he come back．
注意：No sooner…than…；hardly…when；not only…but also這類句型，只將前半部分倒裝，后半部分用正常語序．
3、當(dāng)only置于句首修飾狀語時(shí)，句子要部分倒裝．
Only in this way can we learn English well．
4、so，neither，nor在句首表示"也"或"也不"句子要部分倒裝．
 Tom is very kind．So am I．
5、由as/though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，從句形成倒裝．
 Child as he was，he could speak five languages．
6、so…that/such…that句型中so，such 位于句首時(shí)，句子要部分倒裝．
So fast does light travel that it is difficult for us to imagine its speed．
7、省略了if 的虛擬條件從句中，主謂形成了部分倒裝（虛擬語氣的條件句中，省略 if 后，had，were，should等應(yīng)提前）
 Had you told me earlier，I could have done something．